Gratuitous Fanservice, Onasi Style!

I'm a guy, so this must sound kinda wierd, but I like it. Not Carth, I mean, the picture. The only problem I think is that his left side looks a bit awkward, like he's got a scar or something, but that's really minimal. Otherwise, its terrific. 

Pippogol

You sure do deem to know your way around markers. I was very impressed with the way you shaded this piece.

And now on to the problems! I believe the facial structure has the most serious one. The left side of it is very straight, as if his face was not turned to the degree the rest of the features would signify. It really throws off the face in my eyes. And his hair should be a bit thicker.

And the outline in the muscle for the ribcage should be closer to the center of his chest, as they are they're way too much to the side.

Next thing, his elbow points for one should not be that pronouced, and they should not be curved like they are.

And lastly the hand; the little finger looks shriveled and next time I would suggest making lines for more than one knuckle.

"Respect is a funny thing, people always seem to think they deserve it, but the truth is respect is something you have to earn."

In addition to the above comment, I personally believe that one must know the rules of anatomy to know how to break them. Some people have an artistic style of breaking the rules of anatomy.

The coloring of this peice is actually very good. Whatever mistakes you made, you did a HECK of a great job fixing it.

The above comment is right, if you think from that angle, but remember, some people have an artistic license of messing up the anatomy of characters, and that is quite alright. Just make sure you know anatomy before you attempt to break the rules, that's all I'm saying. And I'm not saying you don't know it, that's just a little word to anyone who listens.