KotOR Ladies 1
Submitted by SinisterlySweet on May 9, 2008 - 11:12pm.
This is just a preview! Go to http://sinisterlysweet.deviantart.com/art/Request-KotOR-Ladies-77111924 for the full version! Done on Bristol paper with Precision V5 pens and Prismacolor markers. Go to www.sinisterlysweet.deviantart.com to see my other stuff. :D
Arturious Criticana.
Due to the exagerated and cartoony style you drew this in, which I am not complaining about, it is exceedingly difficult for me to accuratly critique this. Darn near impossible.
I must give you credit, your style here is very likable. Very relaxed and easy-flowing
Just a few things though. The fingers on Bastila's hand, they look a bit stringy, while it could be argued that that is just another example of the way this was drawn, but look at Juhani's hand and you will see that her fingers agree more with the overall 'fun and cartoony' look while not being overly loose. And the center stripe thingy on Juhani's head doesn't quite line up with the rest of the face.
Well that about covers it, within reason. But I'll probably be Editing this comment if I see any more problems and if I am not sitting up, typing, at 11:00.
I liked this!
"Respect is a funny thing, people always seem to think they deserve it, but the truth is respect is something you have to earn."
Thanks so much! I did this
Thanks so much! I did this a few months ago, but it's always good to hear a critique.
Ahh, my hands are never consistant, I need to practice those more. And my markering is always sloppy, but I'd like to try some timed all-marker drawings to acclimate myself to the media. Again, thank you! :D
Oh these are beautiful
I saw these thismorning but i didn't log in or create my account, they're beautiful. I love Juhani and Mission in the middle totally rocks! bastila is so sweet, i hope shes not looking at me (or maybe she is ) Way to draw!
Thank you very much, I'm
Thank you very much, I'm glad you like it!
hmmmm
hmmmm the comparison im gonna make is not related to starwars but juhani looks like a mix of tess and ashlin off of jak and daxter! No offence intended
No offense taken! I've
No offense taken! I've only played the first Jak + Daxter and the racing game, so I'm not sure who Tess is, but I can definately see the Ashlin. *looks up images* Ahh, okay. I can see that. Thanks!