An Exile: Chpter One

An Exile

By jessimaster123


Chapter One


It had been a few months since Kreia’s death on MalachorV when I finally left for the Unknown Regions. I tried to forget everything she told me about the true Sith , but I know I was being selfish, the true Sith were out there and I had to stop them. I decided I would leave once I finished training my padawan. In spite of this, I left once Visas and Mical made it to the rank of Jedi Knight. I kept having terrible visions of my students being killed by the true Sith.


On this journey, I hope to find my old friend and former Sith Lord, Revan. Before Kreia died she told me that she had left to stop the Sith, perhaps we could join forces like we did back in the Mandalorian Wars. Revan probably would not remember me, I heard rumors that the Jedi Counsel programmed her with a knew identity and remembered only small parts of her past life. I was slightly glad to hear this, my last confrontation with Revan was not a pleasant one, and I could have a clean start.

The Ebon Hawk violently crashed on the unknown world; I thought it was shot down, by who? I dug my way out of the remains of the ship. The planet had a jungle-like terrain, much like Dxun. I found a dark Jedi and a strange creature with gray skin and yellow eyes; I thought it must have been a true Sith. They must have sensed the light in me because the drew their lightsabers and I heard the dark Jedi scream “DIE JEDI SCUM!”

I drew my yellow double-bladed lightsaber and stabbed it into the first dark Jedi. The True Sith much stronger than the dark Jedi we locked ‘sabers quite a few times, but it made one fatal mistake; it tried to drain my force, the creature fell to the ground and I drove my blade into it’s torso. It didn’t know that I was a leach in the force and it would only weaken itself by attempting drain me.

After the Sith were defeated I heard a sound like a child crying. I followed the sound to a ruined dwelling. I found the sound was coming from a human female around seventeen or eighteen standard years old with light blue eyes, ivory skin and blond hair.

“Who are you?” asked the young women in tears. I examined the ruins surrounding her; she was sitting next to the remains of an older woman with the same light colored hair, perhaps. She firmly clasped a small blaster of a foreign design and pointed it at me. She looked unafraid to use it.

“ I’m Jenni Noor, I’m not going to hurt you,” I said as she lowered her blaster.

“ I’m Jadis Sage” she must not have considered me a threat any more.

“ What happened here? ” I asked her she stared at the body beside her and almost cried again.

“ The True Sith attacked us, like Revan said they would. We should have listened to her! ” Jadis suddenly burst into tears again. I set next to her and tried to comfort her. Eventually, she calmed down and I asked her if Revan was still here. “After the Sith attacked, Revan and her other students went to a temple south of here. I got separated from the group. ”

“Could you help me find her? ” I probably could have found the temple on my own, but I didn’t like the idea of leaving her all alone with the Sith still wandering around.

“Alright, come with me it is not far from here,” with Jadis and I teamed up I figured it would be easy to find Revan or would it?
Jadis and I walked through the ruined settlement; dead bodies and rubble littered the terrain. It seemed like the entire settlement was wiped out, it would be a miracle if any one else survived. Jadis whore a depressed facial expression. I thought maybe speaking to her would make her fell better.

“You said that you were one of Revan’s students earlier,” she turned around and looked at me.

“Yes, me and my brother Justin were taught to feel the force, I haven’t made my lightsaber yet. ”

“Why not? ” I asked her.

“This word is a little low on natural resources like crystals, I haven’t found any so far. ”

“I have a few crystals you could use. ”

“Well, thank you, but I want to find a crystal for my lightsaber on my own. Thanks for the offer, though. ” I smiled to my self because this reminded me of when I constructed my first ’saber. I wanted to find a rare violet crystal for my lightsaber. I wouldn’t settle for blue ‘saber like most of the other Jedi guardians. I didn’t complete it until I was thirteen at that point I almost was going to be shipped of to work on some farm instead of become a Jedi. I didn’t tell Jadis this story because it would likely turn into a long and boring rant about my childhood and put her to sleep.

“I understand a lightsaber is special it is important you make it the way you want it to be.” That was at least somewhat less corny than the story of my first lightsaber.

“Did you here that?” she seemed startled. I saw a dark Jedi in a near by tree, he looked only a few years older than Jadis.

“Two Jedi,” he said noticing my ‘saber and Jadis’s padawan robes “I admit I’m a disappointed they’ll let anyone into their order.

“Disappointed, well take out your ‘saber and we’ll see just how disappointed you are,” he did just as my taunt suggested. I drew my two blades and entered a defensive form. I stood in front of Jadis, knowing It would be foolish to fight a Sith with a blaster. He swung his weapon to my throat; the tactic would have beheaded me if I had not blocked it and swung it back at him. This left him completely vulnerable to my attacks, I didn’t think he expected that I would twist my weapon over his wrist and lop off his hand.

“I surrender please don’t kill me!” I put away my lightsaber. Jadis looked at him like she had seen a ghost. “Peter, no it can’t be you, can it?”

The dark Jedi looked up at her “Jadis, I didn’t recognize you at first. ” I turned around to Jadis, “You know him?”

“Yes, we trained together. He was captured by the Sith we thought you were dead. ” She directed the last comment to the wounded boy.

“The true Sith made me their slave. I hate them. ” Said the boy.

“Hate leads to the dark sided I assume that is how they turned you. ” Jadis’s comment made her sound much older than she really was. “Come back to the light side Peter, the Sith are evil you know this. ”

“I know I have much to make up for I will try to stay on the light side. ”

“You trust him, Jadis?”

“Yes, I do. ” I wasn’t sure if I should trust her, after all I hardly knew her, but what choice did I have? I can’t strike down an unarmed opponent and everyone deserves a chance to atone and she claims can help me find Revan. I will have to do what she says, at least until we find Revan.

“Alright then, I’m Jenni Noor and you are?”

“I’m Peter Skywalker. ” I helped him up.

“We should get going before more Sith show up.

OOOhhhh~ A Skywalker eh?

very nice touch putting a skywalker in, haha little does your exile know he's gona be the great great (and so on) grandfather of the allmost destoryer of the galixy who shall be the father of the savor of the galixy lol

The Skywalkers are always

The Skywalkers are always losing lims so I figured it was fitting. I couldn't come up with a more creative last name that would fit him so I'll play around with the Skywalker's ancestry.

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ATTON RULES!

Very Interesting!!

I think that it has a REALLY good story line and i liked the fact that you included the Skywalkers but there are a few spelling mistakes

Skywalker!!

Hmm... I like this guy already. I mean, all Skywalkers are hawt! =P


Only mindless people can hate Carth, Atton, Anakin, or the Master Chief. I am not mindless, and therefore, a fangirl.

Zalbaar swore a lifedebt to Revan. I swore a lifedebt to Jesus.

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