Bastila Shan
Submitted by Shinee on April 9, 2008 - 12:20pm.
Click on the picture for a bigger version, yes? ^^
One of my first attempts at traditional inking... so it's considerably messed up on a few bits XD i'm gonna keep it black and white for now though, I have to practice more with coloured pencils.
The art critic takes his chair...
Very well inked. And I like how you pulled off the hair, with just enough lines to realisticly convey hair.
I just have a few small bits of constructive critisism and nitpicking.
Well the arc of the brow should be straight, in this it curves in a little bit and then goes back out, which doesn't look quite right. And the nostril seems a bit too prenounced. The chin is pointed, like in an anime style but the jaw is rather angular like in an american style. While this is not the major problem my lengthy explination makes it out to be, you still should take it into consideration while drawing in the future.
And one minor nit pick here. Bastila's pigtail-thingy should be a bit lower down
But still, this is a good piece of artwork. You got her clothes just right.
I look forward to more of your work in the future.
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Constructive criticism and
Constructive criticism and nitpicking are alwsyd good and very welcome :D
Maybe it's because I don't have that much experience with inking but something always seems to be a bit lost in the translation from pencil to pen and you're right, I only noticed I didn't particularly like her jaw after I was done and scanned it. What can I say, tired eyes XD
Thank you for pointing out those things, sometimes I don't really notice them until someone nitpicks :p better than the usual "oh it's nice" comment, thanks :)
Well, I think the critic
Well, I think the critic above me has given far more constructive criticism than I could ever find, but I will agree. The hair and clothes are very good, and the face is good, but not quite Bastila, I feel. However, it is a great draw, and if it is one of your first times then I am very impressed. Thumbs up, or at least I would if they still existed. :P
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Very nice
She may be a "spoiled little Jedi princess" but you did a good job on this sketch! When will we see the colored version?
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Nice :D
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Nice :D
PippogolMan! Bastila's
Pippogol
Man! Bastila's hot!
nice picture
You did a good job ^_^A
You did a good job
^_^A long time ago in a gallaxy far far away, Kat was here XD