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You are my opposite

Submitted by Revan Sama on April 3, 2008 - 7:22pm.

Everything about you

Everything about me

Everything about us

It's different

Physically

Emotionally

You have black long hair

I have blond short hair

Your eyes are grey

Mine are dark blue

You are loved

I am hated

You are beauty itself

Even in light

Even in darkness

You are perfection.

You are Spring.

You are Life of the force

And

You are my opposite

Where you create

I destroy

Where you gather colors of every sort

I collect hues of white and gray

Where you can feel and experience life

I see and experience death

You spread warmth and cheer to all

I spread coldness and despair

You are Spring and Summer incarnate in the beauty of life

I am Fall and Winter embodied in ugliness matching that of death

Yet

I can't help it

I can't stop love you

Whatever I love you as a lover

Or as friend

Whatever I am a man

Or a woman

I can't help but admire you

Is it because of that ?

That I went with you to war

Not even because I wanted to save people from the Mandalorians ?

It's seem so illogical

All those sacrifices

For one man ?

No

Not just for one man

For Revan

My lord Revan

I am not hallucinating

Someone like you would never love

Or acknowledge me back

It's just impossible

But you know

Even if someone else has your love

Even if someone else has your friendship

If you are light

If you are darkness

It doesn't matter

Because no matter what happened

You will always be in my heart

My lord

My leader

And as always

I shall obey to your orders

Interesting. I like how

Submitted by ralli on April 4, 2008 - 1:35am.

Interesting. I like how they are in contrast to one another. It's like a conversation, but other times it seems like the Exile (i think) is thinking out loud.

Bravo.

I don't know if it'd fortune or misfortune, but we don't get to write the story of our own life.

Rather simplistic, but very

Submitted by Knight Savtrian on April 4, 2008 - 1:11pm.

Rather simplistic, but very striking in its message....I really like this because thats always how I've felt about how Revan and the Exile are treated. ^_^ good job

Those lines sound familiar...

Submitted by soylatigre on April 23, 2008 - 1:45am.

Interesting... though, I think you could have gone without the lines from 'Kingdom Hearts' in the summary.