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Submitted by Rina Delwynn on March 9, 2008 - 12:40pm.

Female Revan in the Unknown Regions

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Inspired by Adam Brand's song titled 'Not So Strong', which makes me think of Carth & Revan every time I listen to it.
Basically, it's Female Revan on a planet in the Unknown Regions, thinking of Carth and of home.
I'm really proud of it, but it looks far better in real life; it's been taken with my camera and the brightness & contrast have been tweaked. Cause my scanner hates pencil. >.<

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Artists Criteque

Submitted by Triple E on March 12, 2008 - 9:47pm.

I love the detail in the hair! Very good! buuuutttt.... The facial structure could use some work, such as the nose: there is to much bone in the eye area. It makes the face look flat. And the curve on the back of the head goes in a bit more. But still, keep drawing Rina!

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Thanks

Submitted by Rina Delwynn on March 17, 2008 - 7:35am.

Thanks very much! I'm really proud of the hair, myself.
Thanks also for the critique; I'll keep all you've said in mind for next time! =]

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Fantastic

Submitted by smugglermoonofd... on March 19, 2008 - 12:05am.

I love the hair but the nose needs inprovement.But it really does show revan really good as a female sad.Great job as cant wait to see more of your work.

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Thanks

Submitted by Rina Delwynn on April 6, 2008 - 12:35am.

Thanks for the critique- the nose definitely bugs me and I will keep your suggestion in mind next time!

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