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This really good
You finally figure out how to submit the artpiece.
I like the details you put into the background.
Tank
"You know, you are so bad to have around!!"―Carth Onasi
"Yeah, I'm very charming. I'm told." -Leela (aka LSF Revan)
Coming from you that makes my whole year!
This story happened a long time ago in a galaxy far, far away. But it is also happening right now as you read these words.
Thanks, Tank. Yeah, it took me and the suffering admins awhile, but I finally managed- heh heh. I have a lot more as I have been inspired and it's all your fault because your art is sooooooooooooo good!
Jen
*Giggle*
My work actually inspire someone..goodness, you are very kind.
Thank you.
Tank
"You know, you are so bad to have around!!"―Carth Onasi
"Yeah, I'm very charming. I'm told." -Leela (aka LSF Revan)
Modesty, too!
This story happened a long time ago in a galaxy far, far away. But it is also happening right now as you read these words.
C'mon, you HAVE to know how good you are! I like the colors and the black and whites--all of your pieces so far. So, yes, you are a MAster and I am an apprentice--is that Padawan? The first game confused me on that ish.
Jen
You're an artist too???
I was looking for the next chap of your story when I found this. I like the background and Atton looks so sweet and we know how I feel about him. What are you trying to so make me an Atton fan-girl??
Trynn
Uh Huh, I am
This story happened a long time ago in a galaxy far, far away. But it is also happening right now as you read these words.
Thanks for the kind words. If you knew the story behind submitting the art. I had to learn a whole new language, Glad you liked it.
Jen
Just saw this as I was about to sign off!
hey, it's Sue again and DN--we will save space on the site and comment together.
I love this piece! You have a special feel to it and Aton looks so sweet.
DN here, it's Atton, oh mundane one! What really blew me away was the background. I wish there was a larger version so I could see even more of the details
And we will now sign off before more of your stuff is released. Tell Tank, she's cool too and her art is a favorite of mine!
Greetings to you both
This story happened a long time ago in a galaxy far, far away. But it is also happening right now as you read these words.
Sue--thanks-coming from you a non-SW person I know you really saw something in my art.
DN--Sue now has me calling you that--anyway--I had K2 on for an hour with the Exile in the cockpit during the time they are in hyperspace on their way to Citadel Station so I could get the background as well as I could, so thanks for noticing it.
Jen
Great Job
You really capture the "I thought I lost you . . ." in Atton's expression. Very believable and the detail is terrific. Nice job
Thanks for reviewing my work
This story happened a long time ago in a galaxy far, far away. But it is also happening right now as you read these words.
Thanks--one of my fave artists here is Tank and she always manages to get across the mood of the people she draws, so, with Atton, it was important to me to get the right expression on his face.
Jen
Yay you managed to post it
Yay you managed to post it ^^ and what a nice piece of artwork :D
Loving the soft shading you have going on there, nothing too dramatic but still effective. The pose and expression are also very good, although I'm not liking the facial features very much... don't take this the wrong way, I'm just overly critic about everything and anything XD
Overall, it's a wonderful job and an awesome idea for fanart. Definitely loving it.
Hey, my helper!!
This story happened a long time ago in a galaxy far, far away. But it is also happening right now as you read these words.
Again, thanks for all your help or I never would have been able to post any of my art. Atton's face was hard for me to convert from the more cartoony in the game to more real, but any critique is appreciated as I use them to learn and grow as an artist.
Jen
Not bad
Not bad but, as constructive criticism, I think Atton's face might be a little long, if you know what I mean. Other than that, I think your picture's really good.
Oh, I think your other pics are really good too.
Constructive
This story happened a long time ago in a galaxy far, far away. But it is also happening right now as you read these words.
Thanks for the critique--you are probably right. I was trying to get the picture in my head to convert to the Atton in the game and I may have overshot ---anything constructive I take and commit to memory so the same thing won't happen again. Glad you liked my others.
Jen