Love is Love... Prolog
Hi people! This is my first fic I've read a lot of chapters and loved them all! I hope you like my fic.
P.S. Thank you tWiNkLeT for reading over this! ^^
In the heart of Malachor V, the two Jedi approached each other.
"At last you have arrived. Is Malachor as you remember?"
"It's not too late Kreia!' exclaimed Zelda Triforce, the Exile, her deep blue eyes sparkling with anticipation, her blond hair draping over her back, the way Atton always liked it. 'I can save you, if you let me."
"I have thought of this moment, more than you know... And I wondered if here, at this ending between us, if you would care enough to try to save me- if a Jedi could find it within themselves to spare one who has fallen so far. I wanted you to say those words- for that I am grateful. But I don't want your mercy. I want you to break!" Kreia had fallen to the Dark Side; Zelda could hear it in her voice.
"Then this ends NOW!"
It was a fierce fight. Lightsabers clashed and blazed. Strikes were blocked, attempts to hit the other did not hit, if they did, it caused much damage. Finally, the battle ended. However, a final blow was not committed.
"Stop, Kreia! You do not need to die!" Zelda has seen enough death; she wanted no more bloodshed for a dying cause.
"If you do not kill me I shall end you!" Kreia was not bluffing.
"No, it's over!"
"You will not show me mercy. I will see you break before you do!" At that point Kreia summoned three floating lightsabers. A gasp escaped Zelda's lips, but she did not skip a beat. She attacked the lightsabers as if they had a Sith attached to them. But, they were no match for her dual-bladed saber.
"It is done. At last, it is done..." Kreia murmured, she was defeated.
"Kreia, there is still time to save you!"
"Save me? You already have... from now into the future."
"The future?" A look of puzzlement crossed Zelda's face "It's almost impossible to see into the future; the future is always in motion."
"Yes, you are correct, but this place, the heart of Malachor, channels such energies. If you want, I will look into the future and tell you what I see..."
"What will happen to my friends?"
"You travel with them for so long, and yet you do not know them... They were the last of the Jedi you know. The true Jedi upon which the future will be built. They just needed a teacher, and a leader..." As Kreia told Zelda the future of her friends, Zelda listened very closely. And then Zelda asked the most important question to her, not expecting a full answer...
"But what of Atton?"And as she thought, she did not get the answer she hoped for."Atton is, as always, a fool."
A sigh left Zelda's mouth. "Does he love me?"
"He is a fool, and that should answer your question. He has nothing to offer one such as you..."
I thought so. Hmm, I think she meant Yes, but I think you are too good for him...
"Rest now Kreia, this is the end."
When the conversation came to a close, Kreia collapsed... Dead. But Zelda could just barely hear Kreia say "Or is it?"
A brutal shake sent Zelda flying almost off the edge of the platform "Ahh! CRAP!" She barely had time to grab the ledge of the platform.
She almost fell again, but she caught herself just in time. And to her surprise the Ebon Hawk was rising to the platform as if it was rising from the dead, although it was badly damaged And it kind of was. "Atton!!"
"Hey there, let's get going. This place is coming down around our ears!"
Atton was trying to make a joke out of a bad situation, and it worked! Zelda laughed stood up and then ran to the starship.
As the old ship nimbly dodged the falling rocks the crew inside greeted Zelda. Atton, Visas, Mira, and Mical sensed something wrong with her...
"Hey, are you okay?" Bao-Dur was troubled, and Zelda thought probably because wounds and cuts she had received from Malachor were clearly visible.
"Hmm?"
"You look worried." Mical was right on the spot.
Atton scowled.
"Oh... I just have a feeling..."
Before Mical could ask, Atton interrupted by asking the same question, an interjection worthy of the quickness of Knight Speed after all they are rivals. 'What kind of feeling?"
"Not a feeling; more of a question..."
"And that question is?"
"Is this the end or just the beginning?"
"Hmm. Well, I guess we will just have to find out for ourselves..." The crew buckled up and prepared for the jump to hyperspace.
What did she mean? Is this the end... or just the
beginning? Kreia's last words stung Zelda's mind with questions; questions that could only be answered by Kreia or Revan."Ouch!' Zelda just realized the intense pain she was in.
"Don't strain yourself, you took a lot of damage out there,"Atton was very worried; everyone was worried; Her skin was covered in bruses and cuts.
"Okay' Zelda headed for the port dormitories to lie down.
~Later~
After saving Telos, killing three Sith Lords and Kreia the second crew of the Ebon Hawk
were full-on celebrities. A huge party was waiting for them on Telos...
"Welcome back!" Greeted Lieutenant Grenn.
"Glad to be back! Lieutenant, I would like to introduce you to a few new friends: Mira, Mical, Bao Dur, HK-47, T3-M4, and Visas."
"I gladly welcome all of you. Now let me show you all to your rooms."
"Um, Zel?"
"Yes, Atton"
"Can I talk to you in private?"
"Sure..."In private?
As soon as they got to a secure place, behind a few plant's Atton turned and looked very serious.
"Zel I need to talk about, well, US."
"Ok..."Us? What about us?
"Well we've known each other for a while and we've been dating since Nar Shaddaa..."
"That's right..."
"And that's been about nine months..."
Time travels fast in hyperspeed."Atton, can you get to the point?"
"Fine... Here.' He knelt down before her and took out a small velvet box...
"Atton!" All she could do was stand there wide-eyed.
"I love you babe, and I want to be with you forever. If you'll have me?" He grabbed her hand and stood up looking into her deep blue eyes.
"I do..." She stared back at his beautiful hazel ones.
They both leaned in and the flesh on their lips met, arms wrapped around each other in a warm embrace... They wanted this moment to last forever, but it would not.
Reluctantly Zelda removed her lips, 'We should get back, I don't even want to know what Mira would say, about this, and I don't want to explain it, we might have to tell her our plans, well talk more privately soon' Atton nodded and the new couple headed back towards the group...
THANK YOU tWiNkLeT!!!!

-gush- Atton... I'm jealous of the Exile! ^-^ Although, there is some crit I have for you.
OBVIOUSLY Atton and the Exile were together. But I thought the proposal came a bit too quick. Unless... You planned the quick stun...
Either way, love it. More! Soon!
Hmmm. I agree with RavenRand16. I think you rushed the proposal a bit quickly but I can't wait to read what Atton does when the Exile leaves. It would be such a sad chapter.
Anyway, it is a good first chapter because it raises lots of questions that you can answer in all of the other chapters that (waves hand over your face) *you will write*. LOL!!
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Lol. Thanks! I know it was rushed... but in my note book that I prewrite in, Chapter 1 is at about 9 1/2 pages ^^ P.s: Jaq... that's all I'm going to say, well that and... MAY THE FORCE BE WITH YOU!!!
Lol. Thanks! I know it was rushed... but in my note book that I prewrite in, Chapter 1 is at about 9 1/2 pages ^^' P.s: Jaq... that's all I'm going to say, well that and... MAY THE FORCE BE WITH YOU!!!
Opps... ^^'
It is great! I hope you will write more soon. And yes, you maybe rushed with the proposal a little bit, but I still like it!
Well this was my first post so I knew it wouldent be the best... there are a lot of better writers like tWiNkLeT.
BTW!!!! I'm done writing the first chapter so now that its summer i have no more exuses not to type it ^^' hehehe...ohh wait... i could say... no, no never mind... I'll get it out there
BTW!!!! I'm done writing the first chapter so now that its summer i have no more exuses not to type it ^^' hehehe...ohh wait... i could say... no, no never mind... I'll get it out there
im so sorry, im sure alot
im so sorry, im sure alot (some) of you were waiting for the next chapter but i dont think im gona do one, i just started 7th grade and have a lot on my plate T^T sorry, ill try to work on it but im not much of a writer... im more into RPing and drawing.. but i may put some of my drawing up... i think ill draw somthing right now and get it posted as soon as posiple ^^
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me: LUKE I AM YOUR MOTHER!!
luke: ... hey.. wheres Vader?
me: I KILLED HIM SO I COULD TAKE HIS PLACE IN THIS SEAN!! MWAHAHAHA!!! (6)
To be posted 19 Sept 2008 on
To be posted 19 Sept 2008 on StarwarsKnights under The Critic returns and Lucasforums under the Critic’s Two Cents.
TSL at Malachor V: After the battle, truth is revealed.
The story is good if a bit generic. Well portrayed.