Knights Of the Old Republic III
She stared towards the horizon. The wind was blowing carefully, playing with her hair, pressed softly against her face and body. Her cape also played carefully with the wind.
She sensed someone walking up behind her, but it was not an enemy, but an ally. 'What took you so long?' she asked him
'You are really hard to find, you know that?' he answered back. She turned to him and gave him a soft but sad smile.
'I'm sorry.' She said to him.
'For what?'
'For dragging you into this. You have already suffered enough. You became an exile because of my actions. You were chased through the entire galaxy because of me. You shouldn't have to do this...' 'And what about you?' he asked her, walking closer. She closed her eyes and lowered her head, then whispered: 'Because I have to repay the galaxy for my sins...'
'Stop it Revan!' he said angrily. 'That part of you is already dead. She died in the battle against Bastila; she died when the Star Forge was destroyed. You have suffered enough!' she looked at him carefully; again a sad but soft smile covered her beautiful face. 'And let's face it. Even though we are a former Sith Lord and the Exile, we are the only Jedi's left in this galaxy.' He said to her.
'Not exactly.'
Hey, very nice. ^_^
So....who would we be playing as? =P
Would we be playing as the "not exactly" jedi mentioned?
Oooh, I like it. I'm hooked now. Great writing, and I love her hair in the picture, btw. ;)
I love it, this is quite good.
Beautiful! I wonder how this'll turn out...?
Thank's for the comments, guys :D!!!
I'm thinking of writing a story with these three characters in it, so you just have to wait and see :P
Thank's again! :)
Nice and would make a good movie/game cover! :D
Aww, c'mon Darth! You gotta be kiddin' me! I have to wait now?! SO not fair! I throw marshmallows at you virtually! [Translation: Can't wait!]
Ooh, how intriguing. Very good. I wish they'd hurry up and make KIII. What are they trying to do? Kill me with the tension?
I apologize in advanced for what I am about to say to you.
1.The plural of Jedi is Jedi. You have one Jedi, and you have two Jedi. You don't have two "Jedi's". You should know that. 2.When someone other than the current speaker says something, there is a new paragraph. Two people cannot speak within the same paragraph. 3.They aren't the only Jedi left. If you listen, Kreia tells you in the end of KotOR II that your party is the beginning of the new Jedi. Your friends refound the Jedi Order- that's why you can turn them into Jedi to begin with. 4.This story can never work for the game, simply because it assumes that both the exile and Revan turned good. 5.This is not exactly creative. I see no reason to give it a thumbs up. Maybe if I saw a real story I would be intrigued, but as it is, you have simply said "Revan is a woman, the exile is a man, they're both good and there is some other "not exactly" Jedi. That's hardly enough for me to tell whether or not you have good ideas or not, is it?
As for the picture, the styles resemble anime far too much for me to like it.