Carth’s Revelation
Bastila and I enter the landing platform together, to head down to the Rakatan temple together and present me to my followers. Somehow I am not surprised to see Carth. A feral longing is in my very soul, a very keen hunger. I want him; I want him to be mine. Forbidden moments come creeping back to my mind. We didn't want Bastila finding out; it took a great amount of Force energy to keep Bastila from knowing. After all, Bastila had been a Jedi at that time. But now, we were both Sith. I sigh, thinking back on the moments that Carth and I had laid in each other's arms, in a hotel room on Manaan. It had been wonderful, every evening as we had shared blissful moments of love with each other. That had been at least ...three months ago. It took quite a bit of time sorting through all that diplomatic mess trying to even get to the Star Map.
So just seeing Carth standing there made me lick my newly darkened lips. The manifestation of my Dark Side power was beginning to make itself manifest upon my flesh, once again. He looked at me and said, 'So you killed Darth Malak. Somehow I... I always knew you would.'
'Somehow I am not surprised you found a way here.'
Carth sighed wearily, 'A Republic fleet picked me up from the planet. I told them of your betrayal...but I also told them I couldn't abandon you. I had to come. I said I'd find a way to save you from yourself and I will.'
I manage to pull my lips forward in a sweet 'angelic' smile at Carth, inwardly I know that he wants me as much as I want him. Telling him my little secret will make things so much enjoyable. Bastila snarls she is eager for blood and wants to kill him right away. I hold up my hand, 'Patience Bastila....'
I look back at Carth, 'Its good you came. I'll enjoy...telling you...' I pause, taking absolute delight in revealing the next words, 'You remember all those nights we spent on Manaan.'
Carth nods, 'How can I forget Revan. How can I forget what you meant to me?
I edge ever so closer to Carth and I say calmly, 'Well....' I pause letting each word sink in, 'I am pregnant Carth....pregnant with your child.'
Carth pales and Bastila is mortified. She cries out, 'Master....you mean to tell me that you have been carrying this man's child?'
I chuckle, 'Some things... at that time were not meant for you to know, my apprentice.'
'When I found out I was Revan. I always knew my destiny was to reclaim my position as Dark Lord. I decided to seduce you as Lokei, to make sure that I would have your child.'
Carth was about to protest and I interrupted him, 'It was my desire to have you join me, Carth, and have you become my consort. Together our child would bridge the Republic and the Sith Empire and forge the two together. Think Carth, together we will create a dynasty. A powerful Sith dynasty, by taking part of the old and putting it with the new. The galaxy will worship and obey us. I love you Carth, all I do now is for both of us.
Carth looks pained and I smile. I knew that I had him. He couldn't abandon Dustil. When we were on Korriban I willingly redeemed Dustil from the Sith. I had played the sweet innocent Jedi, Lokei Tizza who was clearly concerned for Carth and his son. Yet as Revan, my desires for Carth was to posses him as my lover. Carth was a family oriented person. He would not deny himself and abandon the child that he had so recently fathered.
Bastila smiles, beginning to understand what my plans are for Carth. 'Master if you do not need me. I will be in the Ebon Hawk waiting to take you to your temple.'
I nod and she walks into the ship.
I pace around Carth as he sighs sadly, 'Revan...I love you. How do I know you are telling the truth about this child?'
I simply take his hand and place it on my belly, he gasps as I use the Force to make the developing child kick his hand.
He glances back up at me and says,' This child is a part of both of us. I can't deny our child a father.'
'Yes, Carth....you can't deny our child a father. A child needs a father as well as a mother. Serve me Carth, be my consort. Together the galaxy will be ours.'
Carth looks scared; scared to admit that I am Darth Revan, the woman he loves. I trace a finger down his cheek,'Don't be afraid Carth, I love you. Let go of your fear of me. We were meant to be together that's what matters. Let go of your fear and embrace your destiny. I will make you a man of importance in the Sith Empire, my love. Your name will be feared along with mine.'
Carth is weakening, I feel it, and it won't be much longer till he devotes himself to the Dark Side and to me.
'I don't know Revan.'
I am eager to kiss him and he is eager to kiss me. He folds his arms around me and we share a delightsome passion filled kiss. I whisper in his ear,' You want this don't you? Your arms around mine, the warm passionate kisses, and the long nights together. Think about it my love. After all we have been through don't we both deserve that.'
Carth chuckles, 'Yes...I guess you're right Revan. We do deserve that.'
"Then swear allegiance to me. Swear to be my consort. Swear loyalty to the Sith Empire. Together we will rule the galaxy.'
Carth falls on his knees, 'I swear with all my heart, my allegiance and loyalty to you Revan. I swear to be your consort. I pledge myself to the Sith Empire and to its future and...to our child's future.'
I pause in thought and ask him,'Carth why did you come here in the first place?' I want to make sure his conversion is sure. Carth must willingly admit to himself and to me that he is my servant and that he has truly turned his back upon the Republic.'
'I came here to try and convince you to come back with me to the Republic or maybe kidnap you. I know that sounds a bit...stupid.'
I laugh, 'Kidnap me! I am Darth Revan. What a silly childish idea.'
Carth laughs, 'I know...I know but does that really matter now. I serve the Sith and I serve you. You Revan, are my Empress. I love you, I'd kill for you. I'd die for you. My love for you and for our child holds no bounds.'
I pause, 'And what about the Republic?'
Carth sighs, 'You're what matters to me Revan, you and our child. That means more to me than any Republic.'
He is at last mine. Carth Onasi, soldier of the Republic, is mine and a servant to the Sith. I can feel his soul slowly darken. He has become my dark champion and lover.
'Good....rise my consort. Come, Bastila is waiting for us.' Carth rises from the floor and places his hand in mine. Slowly, together we begin walking to the Ebon Hawk. This is truly a wonderful day for the Dark Side and the Sith Empire. Long live my Empire.

How very... evil :) I love it, Revangoddess.
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KOTOR on the Rakata World after the Star Forge: Revan finally gets her man
I tended to agree with both Twiklet and Chemist Own that Carth gave in too easily. But I can understand why a man would be torn in this situation. The piece flowed smoothly to a nice clean finish.
Pick of the Week
Very interesting. I don't normally read female Revan stories, but this one was really good.
I think Carth gave in a little too easily, but I still liked it. The descriptions were very good, and I felt the awesomeness. This was nice, and an excellent read on a boring day.
Uh...Wow...Very shocking...Um..I'm a little speech less...Uh right now...Um...wow.
Really nice story. That would be so sweet if that really happened on the game.
Well, that was kind of sudden. ^^ But very nice all the same...dark side seems kind of tempting right now. lol
interesting
very good :)
I...DONT KNOW what to say except...nice I think I
likeit okay!
I liked it. I read some of the reviews who thought he gave in too easily but obviously they might not know how it ends in the game. In the game he gives in even more easy when Revan presents him the choice to be with her. She uses a mind trick for him to give in. Least this ending makes more sense since it forces him to side with Revan mainly because of his child with her as well as his love.
Too be honest, I don't like stories where Revan seduces Carth to the darkside. It ruins his character in my opion. Still, this was an original idea, Revan intentionally getting pregnant to win Carth over
hehe revan and carth on manaan....didnt see that coming lol but hey, great story, even tho im a lightside male rev...o well :)